Hi to everybody!
My name is FLY.
I have chosen this name because it would be wonderful to fly. To expand your wings and begin to wave them softly: up, down, up, down, up, down... And, little by little, increase the speed.
You will feel that your body rises, softly, to your wings' rhythm.
You will feel the strong air on your face. Initially it would be a problem and you will have bad moments but you will love it.
You will be afraid of falling down. You will be afraid of getting lost. You will be afraid of some terrifying birds that may prosecute you. But you will love it.
And to love you will have to build your own bubble and continue your flying. You will have to learn of your mistakes and to make yourself strong, invulnerable but also a bit tender, a bit innocent. To be wrong during your whole life and to never stop learning things.
Someday my dream will become true, and I will fly.
I will fly, far, far away.
Because everybody wants to be free...
Don't let anyone to cut your wings.
Carpe Diem
FLY
6 comments:
This is a beautiful presentation! It's got rhythm and feeling. There aren't many comments to make on the language. You've certainly taken care of it. Here are some of the things I'd change:
-You will feel the strong air ON your face
-you will SPEND (OR) HAVE bad moments
-You will be afraid of some terrifying birds that MAY PROSECUTE you (you cannot use the past agreeing with the future… can you see?)
Good job!!!
Hi Fly! nice to read this text. And I,m sure you are flying now..............you are alive ! Life is fly. You are doing your dream! :)
Hi!
You said: "you will be afraid of getting lost". Well, I think one of the best things of fly would be getting lost when you want, don't you think?
See you in the sky!
Hi fly!
What a wonderful text have you done! I've enjoyed a lot reading it because it is so poetic and sensitive. While I was reading I could imagine myself flying.
Yes Fly! To be lost is only funny when you want, or when you need it.
Expecting your new text!
Your text is very suggestive, Fly! as well as your name.
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